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I'd like write a love poem
But it's not for you
Cuz you are my angel
While the one can't be due

It's a dream I always know
For flowers blooming in snow
Freezing winter stayed too long
How can it miss the voice who call

Forgive the child don't want to wake up
It's a dazzling night with galaxy dump
Fly to the moon if stars hop
Leave my love merge to a cup

A cup of shine for your catching hair
A cup of dark for my lonely despair

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中文新詩後來都不講求押韻了,可是不知為何,總覺得英文詩如果不押韻便全然無味,而且押韻之外,節奏感亦是非常重要卻難以言說的關鍵,只能靠著朗誦來調整,為此,想必文法相當慘不忍睹(而且我的押韻方法太過笨拙),不過也無妨吧,反正我寫詩只是為了一個心情,一個過程。

然而菜英文如我,又何敢稱其為詩,只是心裡頭總會浮現一些句子,就想把它完成,至於為什麼是英文,也同樣是種感覺罷了,大概覺得用這種陌生的語言就能比較委婉,其實也只是自欺欺人。

 

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